Aletterofsympathy慰问信课件--高三英语写作专项.pptx

慰问信：表示安慰同情对方的遭遇，并对对方进行鼓励，表示愿意提供帮助。假定你是李华，你的同学Peter是从英国来的交换生，你发现最近他在课堂上总是垂着头，看起来很沮丧。请你给Peter写一封邮件， 表达你对他的关心。注意：1.词数100左右2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯背景起因目的step 1outlineGiving the purposeAsking if something is wrongExpressing your concernEncouraging Peter and expecting his replystep 2Giving the purpose起因 + 目的寒暄 +你最近过得怎么样？最近我发现你在课堂上总是垂着头，看起来很沮丧。这件事让我很担心你。How are you doing these days?How are you keeping recently?How is everything going?step 2Giving the purpose起因 + 目的寒暄 +你最近过得怎么样？最近我发现你在课堂上总是垂着头，看起来很沮丧。这件事让我很担心你。lower one s headHow is everything going? Recently I have noticed that you always lower your head, appearing quite depressed.step 2Giving the purpose起因 + 目的寒暄 +你最近过得怎么样？最近我发现你在课堂上总是垂着头，看起来很沮丧。这件事让我很担心你。be concerned about / be worried aboutHow is everything going? Recently I have noticed that you always lower your head, appearing quite depressed.So I am greatly worried/concerned about you.Therefore As a resultstep 2Giving the purpose起因 + 目的寒暄 +你最近过得怎么样？最近我发现你在课堂上总是垂着头，看起来很沮丧。这件事让我很担心你。be concerned about / be worried aboutHow is everything going? Recently I have noticed that you always lower your head, appearing quite depressed, which makes me greatly concerned about you.quite completely fullystep 2Asking if something is wrongExpressing your concern询问 + 关心询问 + 猜测（背景） + 关心你能告诉我发生了什么事吗？我想你是不是不适应中国的生活，或者对学习感到困惑。我希望你能够让我和你分享你的麻烦，也许我可以帮你减轻你的焦虑。要记住我随时可以为你提供帮助。如果有什么我可以做的，请不要犹豫，让我知道。Could do tell me what happened with you?what s wrong with you?what s the matter with you?step 2Asking if something is wrongExpressing your concern询问 + 关心询问 + 猜测（背景） + 关心你能告诉我发生了什么事吗？我想你是不是不适应中国的生活，或者对学习感到困惑。我希望你能够让我和你分享你的麻烦，也许我可以帮你减轻你的焦虑。要记住我随时可以为你提供帮助。如果有什么我可以做的，请不要犹豫，让我知道。Could do tell me what happened with you? I wonder whether you are not used to the life in China or you are confused about the lessons.I wonder you may be not used to the life in China.step 2Asking if something is wrongExpressing your concern询问 + 关心询问 + 猜测（背景） + 关心你能告诉我发生了什么事吗？我想你是不是不适应中国的生活，或者对学习感到困惑。我希望你能够让我和你分享你的麻烦，也许我可以帮你减轻你的焦虑。要记住我随时可以为你提供帮助。如果有什么我可以做的，请不要犹豫，让我知道。relieveease one s worries Could do tell me what happened with you? I wonder whether you are not used to the life in China. or you are confused about the lessons I hope that you can let me share you trouble with me. And maybe I can help to relieve your worries.You can share your trouble with me.It is likely that I can help to relieve your worries.step 2Asking if something is wrongExpressing your concern询问 + 猜测（背景） + 关心你能告诉我发生了什么事吗？我想你是不是不适应中国的生活，或者对学习感到困惑。我希望你能够让我和你分享你的麻烦，也许我可以帮你减轻你的焦虑。要记住我随时可以为你提供帮助。如果有什么我可以做的，请不要犹豫，让我知道。at any time/moment hesitateCould do tell me what happened with you? I wonder whether you are not used to the life in China or you are confused about the lessons.I hope that you can share your trouble with me.And maybe I can help to relieve your worries. Remember that I can help you at any time. If there is anything I can do for you, don t hesitate to let me know.I am ready to help please tell me right awaystep 2Encouraging Peter and expecting his reply鼓励 + 期待回信振作起来，相信一切都会好起来的。我希望你可以早日回复我。cheer upCheer up and believe that everything will be OK. I am looking forward to your early reply.step 3Dear Peter, How is everything going? Recently I have noticed that you always lower your head, appearing quite depressed. So I am greatly worried/concerned about you. Could do tell me what happened with you? I wonder whether you are not used to the life in China or you are confused about the lessons. I hope that you can share your trouble with me. And maybe I can help to relieve your worries. Remember that I can help you at any time. If there is anything I can do for you, don t hesitate to let me know. Cheer up and believe that everything will be OK. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours Li Hua