应用文写作：phubbing(低头族)课件--高三英语写作专项.pptx

Writing Teaching aim: Practice writing a phenomenon.Teaching focuses: 1 List key points. 2 Improve sentences by employing some English structures and connective words and phrases.PhubbingNoun The fact of holding a mobile phone in a social setting of two or more people ,and then interacting with that mobile phone and not the people in that setting.phubbingPhone SnubSnub (冷落)世界上最遥远遥远的距离莫过过于我们们坐在一起，你你却在“刷屏屏”。书面表达书面表达智能通讯的沉迷智能通讯的沉迷(phubbing)已经成为不能被已经成为不能被忽视的普遍问题。忽视的普遍问题。假定你是李华，请就这一现象发表你的观点，假定你是李华，请就这一现象发表你的观点，要点包括：要点包括： 1.危害危害 2.建议建议 注意：注意：1.字数字数100左右；左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 审审：体裁，人称，时态：体裁，人称，时态 列：列要点列：列要点(中英文词、句均可中英文词、句均可) 写写：连点成句：连点成句 润：换结构润：换结构, 加连接词加连接词 查查：从头到尾读一遍，从语感、语法、行文：从头到尾读一遍，从语感、语法、行文逻辑、习惯表达和书写等方面检查。逻辑、习惯表达和书写等方面检查。 抄抄：干净：干净,整洁整洁,清楚清楚 Review: Steps in writing a composition书面表达书面表达智能通讯的沉迷智能通讯的沉迷(phubbing)已经成为不能被已经成为不能被忽视的普遍问题。忽视的普遍问题。假定你是李华，请就这一现象发表你的观点，假定你是李华，请就这一现象发表你的观点，要点包括：要点包括： 1.危害危害 2.建议建议 注意：注意：1.字数字数100左右；左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Para1: IntroductionPara 2: Harms A. physical damages 1). eyes: tired, dry; eyesight: drop 2). neck : twister/ out of shape, 3). fingers: hurt, be numb 4). wrist: 5). ugly figure 6). wrinkles 列：列要点列：列要点(中英文词、句均可中英文词、句均可)智能通讯的智能通讯的沉迷沉迷(phubbing)已经成为不已经成为不能被忽视的能被忽视的普遍问题。普遍问题。要点包括：要点包括： 1.危害危害 2.建议建议 B. mental/ psychological problems 1). easily anxious /depressed 2). lose the ability to communicate face to face 3). be distracted from the work, study 4). Rude, be indifferent to 5). potential dangerPara 3: Suggestions 1) control the time; 2) Relax 10 minutes every half-hour; 3) control behavior, learn to understand and respect the feeling of the people in front. 4) develop interests of out-door activitiesPara 4: Conclusion1 递进关系递进关系first, whats more, besides, furthermore,whats worse, in addition, more importantly, last not least2 对比关系对比关系 on the contrary 3 举例解释举例解释for instance4 因果关系因果关系as a result, consequently Do use them properly and naturally.润：加连接词润：加连接词润：换结构润：换结构Useful English structures(一一) 1 It is adj.+ that-clause2 非限制性定从非限制性定从 , which.3 动名词作主语动名词作主语4 分词作定语或状语分词作定语或状语5 Not until + 助动词助动词 + S + V6 Only 助动词助动词 + S + VPractice: 润：换结构润：换结构 1.长时间盯着手机往往会让长时间盯着手机往往会让脊椎(spine)变形变形，最终导致别的身体疾病。，最终导致别的身体疾病。（动名词作主（动名词作主语）语） Staring at a phone for a long time tends to make our spine out of shape, which eventually leads to other diseases.2. 手机的沉迷，会冷落身边的家人朋友，这手机的沉迷，会冷落身边的家人朋友，这无疑是极不礼貌的。无疑是极不礼貌的。(Its adj. to do)When addicted to the cell phone, undoubtedly, its extremely impolite to snub our family and friends.3 直到我们放下手机时，直到我们放下手机时， 我们才能真正享受到我们才能真正享受到人与人交往的温暖。（人与人交往的温暖。（Not until 的倒装句）的倒装句）Not until we put down the cell phone can we really enjoy the warmth of interpersonal communication. Phubbing is a universal problem that can nolonger be ignored. From family reunion to datewith a friend, people couldnt stop staring at theirphones, and snubbing the persons in frontcompletely, which has greatly influenced us inseveral aspects. _ _ _ Not until we put down the cell phone can wereally enjoy the taste of food and the warmth ofinterpersonal communication. Lets say no tophubbing!20Copyright 2012 Andy Guo. All rights reserved。 Thank you Its time to show yourself!