2019-2020学年新教材高中英语unit3 on the moveperiod5writing教学案版本：外研版必修第二册.doc

Period 5Writing概要写作运动故事技法指导本单元的写作项目是概要写作，主题为运动故事。作为高中生的大家，运动和学习其实一样重要。只有好的身体，才能让我们有活力、有信心的好好学习文化知识。写作时要注意以下几点：1细读原文，把握大意。首先要仔细阅读原文，然后对其进行整体分析，掌握原文大意和结构，明确全文的主题和各段的段落大意。运用其特有的活力特征，整体文章应体现积极、健康。2提炼要点，转述观点。分析原文的内容和结构，将各要点分项简明扼要地表述，注意在结构上的顺序。3草拟提纲，写出初稿。将挑选出来的要点作为框架草拟详细的提纲，以所列的提纲作为依据写出概要的初稿，并注意专有运动名词的拼写。经典句式1开头常用句式All students are encouraged to take part in a sport. 鼓励所有的学生都要参加一项体育运动。You have to have a strong will to compete in individual sports. 你必须意志坚强才能参加个人体育项目的竞争。A lot of schools have their own sports teams. 许多学校有自己的运动队。She excels at sports. 她在体育运动方面很优秀。2主体段落常用句式My ambition was to play sport at the highest level. 我的志向就是成为最高水平的运动员。Football is the most popular spectator sport. 足球是人们最爱看的运动。Kasparov became world champion. 卡斯帕罗夫成了世界冠军。After he won the amateur championship he turned professional. 他获得业余赛冠军后就转为了职业运动员。3结尾常用句式Try to fit some regular exercise into your daily routine. 尽量在日常生活中安排一些经常性的锻炼。Gentle exercise can be beneficial for older people. 运动量不大的锻炼对年长者有益。You can do exercises to strengthen your stomach muscles. 你可以通过锻炼来增强腹部肌肉。Taking regular exercise is the best way to improve your overall health. 经常锻炼是改善整体健康状况的最佳方法。典例演练阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Who says you have to stay inside your home when it is cold outside? Theres an unusual sport practiced in the northern United States, and the season only starts when winds start blowing and the temperature drops below zero.The sport is called ice boating. Clement Chua, who comes from a much warmer climate, is learning all about ice boating. Chua signed up for an ice boating class because he wanted to do something he couldnt do at home.One experienced ice boater calls the sport “ephemeral”. In other words, the conditions for ice boating do not happen very often. And when the conditions are right, they are not right for very long.“You can go for weeks in the winter when you cant go ice boating，” says 81yearold Lloyd Roberts. Roberts has been ice boating for 40 years. He says dedicated ice boaters make the sport a major event in their lives, just after funerals and weddings. The capital of ice boating in the United States is now the northeastern state of Maine. It once was New Jersey. But the capital moved north because Maine has colder winters than before, and New Jerseys winters are sometimes too warm for good ice to form.Chua says ice boats are like small sailboats, but they have sharp blades designed for skimming over the ice. The boats catch the wind and move fast on clear and smooth ice. Roberts says there are only about six good days for ice boating each winter. Jim Thieler is a serious ice boater. He says there is always a concern about getting wet, because sometimes the ice is not strong enough to support the weight of both the boat and the boater. That is why ice boaters always go out in groups, and wear special equipment. You need to wear cleats to avoid slipping on the ice. You also need warm clothes, because sometimes the wind will stop blowing, and boaters can stay in the cold for a long period of time before they make it back to the land. 精彩范文Ice boating in winter in the northern United States becomes popular with people. (要点1) Ice boating is a unique activity, which requires special weather conditions, skills and courage. (要点2) Now the capital has moved from New Jersey to Maine, which mainly results from the temperature. (要点3) For those who are interested in the sport, some protective measures are essential in case of danger. (要点4)总评本篇范文将原文整理为四个要点，第一个要点是对文章的总体概括；接着，按照原文的顺序，在不曲解文章大意的基础上，进行了同义句转换，用词精准、句式高级。亮点呈现(1)Ice boating is a unique activity, which requires . 使用了定语从句，使表达更加清晰准确。(2)in case of 使用固定短语，传达句意清楚又不失精炼。跟踪演练阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Group exercise is one of the most useful ways to improve physical health and maintain a healthy lifestyle. Group exercise is challenging but fun! Of course everyone knows that exercise is good for the body. However, studies have shown that when exercise is done in groups, it is great for improving not only physical health but also mental health. It is a chance to be social and improve your strength. Also, group exercise creates a community (团体) feel and the shared common goal makes participants work hard.Another beneficial aspect of group exercise is the informational support participants receive from the instructor. If you fear the gym because you feel lost and dont want to embarrass yourself, then group training is a better choice for you. It is an awesome chance to learn more about health through the clear instruction and supervision (监督) of a fitness instructor. If you are tired of wandering around the gym wasting time and becoming bored, you can attend an optimistic group exercise class that will keep your exercise in the right direction.If you are serious about wanting to live a healthy lifestyle, it is very important to surround yourself with people who will provide you with the proper emotional support. I wouldnt speak angrily to anyone for deciding to party on the weekends, and in turn I wouldnt expect anyone to scold me for focusing on my health. Surround yourself with people who encourage and understand you! Plan to go for a jog with a friend, and then try a fun healthy restaurant or fresh juice bar! Surrounding yourself with people who will provide you with support can be very beneficial while working towards reaching health goals. First, decide to do it for yourself and work towards maintaining a positive mind. Then make sure the people you surround yourself with are supportive. Dont let negativity (消极性) ruin your motivation (积极性) 写前导读：本文是一篇说明文。想运动却又不能坚持，不如试试团体运动！精彩范文Group exercise can help you to improve physical health and keep a healthy lifestyle. (要点1) Another advantage of group exercise is that you can receive informational support from the instructor. (要点2) However, if you want to live a healthy lifestyle, you should surround yourself with those who can support, encourage and understand you. (要点3) Also, you should maintain a positive mind. (要点4)课外拓展阅读中国优秀传统文化专题练阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。Porcelain, also _1_ (call) fine china, featuring its delicate texture, pleasing color, and refined sculpture, has been one of the _2_ (good) artworks introduced to the western world through the Silk Road. The earliest one _3_ (find) made of Kaolin in the Shang Dynasty (17th11th Century BC), and possessed the common aspects of the smoothness and unaffected quality of hard enamel (瓷釉), though pottery wares (陶器) were more _4_ (wide) used among most of the ordinary people. Anyway it was the beginning. In the following dynasties, due _5_ its durability (耐久性) and shine, porcelain rapidly became _6_ necessity of daily life, especially in the middle and upper classes. They were made in the form of all kinds of _7_ (item), such as bowls, cups, tea sets, vases, jewel cases, musical instruments and boxes, as well as pillows for traditional doctors to use to feel ones pulse.Through the _8_ (develop) of over 4,000 years, now it is still a brilliant kind of art that attracts thousands of people. The Porcelain Capital, Jingdezhen in Jiangxi Province, _9_ has been praised for thousands of years, will be certain _10_ (satisfy) your appetite for beauty.1_2._3._4._5_6._7._8._9_10._答案：1.called2.best3.was found4.widely5.to6.a7.items8.development9.which10.to satisfyPorcelain is called china in English because it was first made in China. 瓷器在英语里写做china，因为瓷器最早是由中国制造的。