应用文写作：推荐信课件--高三英语写作专项.pptx

假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。英国交换生Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对你校的学生社团非常感兴趣，计划下学期参加其中一个。他向你征询建议。请给他回邮件，内容包括：why what how1.推荐的社团；2.推荐的理由；3.建议他做哪些准备。假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。英国交换生Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对你校的学生社团非常感兴趣，计划下学期参加其中一个。他向你征询建议。请给他回邮件，内容包括：1.推荐的社团；2.推荐的理由；3.建议他做哪些准备。Part 1 Purpose of writing(why)一、结构和内容交代写作背景交代写作背景：得知你对我校学生社团感兴趣，下学期想要参加其中之一。表明写作目的表明写作目的：我写信给你提出建议；Part 2 Main Body (what)内容开放，但必须符合逻辑，符合生活实际。1推荐社团的名称。2推荐该社团的理由。注意：注意：注意：注意：可以可以可以可以简单简单介介介介绍该绍该社社社社团团的活的活的活的活动动主要内容，但不主要内容，但不主要内容，但不主要内容，但不应该应该是本段重点。重点是本段重点。重点是本段重点。重点是本段重点。重点应应扣在扣在扣在扣在“理由理由理由理由”上。上。上。上。理由理由理由理由应该应该符合交符合交符合交符合交际际，站在英国人站在英国人站在英国人站在英国人JimJim的角度去写的角度去写的角度去写的角度去写：如，参加京如，参加京如，参加京如，参加京剧剧社可以社可以社可以社可以令你体令你体令你体令你体验验中国中国中国中国传统艺术传统艺术。Joining this club can give you a taste of Chinese traditional art and even have a hands-on experience.1.To begin with,Confucius is the greatest thinker of ancient China.Not only did he found the Confucianism,but he traveled from countries to countries to spread his concept as well.Whats more,his theory of“Ren”is so great that it even has influence on today China.2.Because I am a member of the club,I can help you.3.To start with,history club allows you to voice your opinion on historical events,from which you can form your own idea.Whats more,materials about Chinese history will be distributed regularly,extending your knowledge about the splendid history and its charming culture.4.Id like you to try Chinese poetry club.Not only because it offers information of Chinese poems,but also teaches you methods to admire the beauty of rhythm and the stories the poems contain as well.5.You can choose Peking Opera since you will learn a lot.6.Sipping a cup of coffee and chatting freely with your new friends,you will find yourself relieved form in the charming world of books.介绍，而非理由，逻辑不清介绍，而非理由，逻辑不清没有站在没有站在Jim需求的角度谈需求的角度谈过于空泛，不具体过于空泛，不具体理由具体，体现了该社团的与众不同之处；从符合理由具体，体现了该社团的与众不同之处；从符合JimJim的需求角度去写，逻辑合理。的需求角度去写，逻辑合理。Which are good reasons?WhyWhich are good reasons?WhyPart 3.Suggestions on preparation提出合理建议。这段不是写作主体，要略写，不用展开。可以是物品上的准可以是物品上的准备；也可以是知；也可以是知识、技能上的准、技能上的准备。如：。如：As for preparation,buying a brush pen,paper and ink in advance is needed.It is a good idea to search for related background knowledge so that you will fully understand the conception of poetry.Part 4.Closing体现交际得体。希望我的建议对你有帮助；如果还有更多问题，请随时联系我；祝好/盼复。Hope my suggestions can be of help.If you want to learn anything more,dont hesitate to contact me.Best wishes.二、交际得体（文体、语气）Jim是英国交换生，所以语气应礼貌得体。你的推荐需使他产生参加你所推荐社团的兴趣。要让Jim有一种被尊重、愉悦的心情。避免使用命令句；同时表达愿望和建议时可以使用虚拟语气。五、各档次例文五、各档次例文（14分）内容完整，条理清楚、文章整体连贯、流畅，交际得体，词汇句式丰富，表达自然真实，体现出较强的语言运用能力。（13分）：内容、条理、交际合理，词汇句式丰富华丽，能看出学生积累，但表达欠地道，但是为了丰富表达所致。（10分）：考生语言功底较好，但对孔子的介绍过多，喧宾夺主，陈述理由逻辑不充分，没有从Jim的角度去写。How:language How:language reasons?1.The club will broaden our knowledge about Chinese painting.2.It will give you a taste of Chinese traditional arts.3.You will have a hands-on experience by painting Peking opera masks.4.The club will give you a chance to seefor yourself.5.You will be rewarded with spectacular views on top of the mountain.The club aims to improve overseas students Chinese.Each class is expected to perform one English short play written and directed by students themselves.Through this activity,foreign students like you will have a better understanding of the Chinese culture,which will broaden your horizon.There is no doubt that you will have a lot of fun while learning.