2023老高考旧教材英语高考第二轮专题总复习--写作限时练.docx

2023老高考旧教材英语高考第二轮专题复习35分写作限时总分值练（一）I .短文改错（2022安徽蚌埠三模）I recalled one of my earliest memory of baking.I always sit at the kitchen table when my mom baked,and I had observed my process many times.As I started to try,I didn' t know I shouldn' t handle the dough with my hands too much but I made a mess in the kitchen.As my mom arrived at home,the smell of fresh baked bread welcomed her.She praised me for my attempt,instead of blame me for the state of the kitchen.What surprise it was!That night she told my dad how pleasing she was,and what a good job I' d done.lt is the most wonderful experience which always reminds me of my childhood.IL书面表达（2022山西太原二模）“英语活动周”正在向全校学生征集英语故事,请你以“A Conflict with My Parents”为题，写一篇短 文投稿，内容包括：1 .分歧的原因；2 .化解的过程；3 .得到的启示。注意：1 ,词数100左右；2 .短文题目和首句已为你写好。A Conflict with My ParentsThere is no doubt that teenagers sometimes have conflicts with their parents,and I am no exception.35分写作限时总分值练（一）I .第一句:memorymemories解析考查名词的数。oneof+名词复数。故将memory改为 memories o第二句:sit-sat解析考查动词的时态。本文描述的是过去发生的事情,所以用一般过去时。故 将sit改为sato第二句:第二个my-her解析考查代词。这里是指作者妈妈烤面包的过程，所以用代词her。 故将my改为hero第三句:but-and/so解析考查连词。前后句是并列关系或因果关系，而非转折关系。故将but 改为 and/so o第四句:将home前的at删去 解析考查介词。副词home前不加介词。故将home前的at删 去。第四句:fresh-freshly 解析 考查副词。动词baked前用副词修饰。故将fresh改为freshlyo 第五句:blame一blaming解析考查非谓语动词。介词of后用动词-加g形式。故将blame改为 blamingo第六句:surprise前加a解析考查冠词。surprise“惊讶”为可数名词，且以辅音音素开头，故在 surprise 前加 a。第七句:pleasingpleased解析考查形容词。逻辑主语是she,指人,所以用-ed形式形容词作表 语。故将 pleasing 改为 pleased o第八句:which-that解析考查强调句。分析句子结构可知，本句为强调句。其结构为“It is/was+强调局部+that（强调人可用who）+其他''，强调主语the most wonderful experience,应用 thatoII .A Conflict with My ParentsThere is no doubt that teenagers sometimes have conflicts with their parents,and I am no exception.Three years ago,! joined the school basketball club but my parents told me to quit,arguing that my time should be spent nowhere but in studying.This really angered me and we quarrelled violently.Frustrated,I turned to my head teacher and he offered me many insights.Inspired by him,I conversed with my parents sincerely,and we straightened the matter out.I promised to strike a balance between study and play and they permitted me to pursue my hobby.Eventually,basketball didn, t affect my study.Instead,it enabled me to better manage my time.From this conflict,V ve learned acting on impulse will do nobody good.We should put ourselves on an equal footing with our parents and try to reach a compromise.