Unit4单元话题作文：宇宙与太空学案- 高三英语一轮复习人教新课标必修三.doc

M3U4 单元话题作文：宇宙与太空假设你是李华，你爱好太空探险但是却得不到父母的理解，于是你给英国朋友斯蒂芬(Stephen)发电子邮件进行交流并请求帮助。要点如下：父母的意见；你的观点(至少写2点)；请求帮助。1补全要点句(黑体部分请用本单元所学词汇)我和父母之间存在一个问题，使我不能专心学习。There exists a problem between my parents and me, and that 我对太空探险很痴迷，因此我业余时间常去图书馆，在那里我掌握了许多与太空探险有关的材料。I am so crazy about space exploration that in my spare time I often go to the library, 这使我的父母很生气，因为他们认为我的爱好对我的学习有害。This makes my parents very angry because they think 使我沮丧的是他们总是阻止我去图书馆，并督促我花更多的时间在我的学习上。(主语从句)_依我看，良好的爱好不仅对我的全面发展有益，而且有助于我日后的成功。In my view, not only are healthy hobbies beneficial to my overall development but they can also 既然你处理过类似的情况，我想知道你是否能给我一些建议。 , I'm wondering whether you can offer me some suggestions.2升级平淡句用现在分词作状语升级句_用非限制性定语从句升级句_3衔接成美文(注意使用适当的过渡衔接词汇：actually, however, moreover)_参考答案：1补全要点句(黑体部分请用本单元所学词汇)我和父母之间存在一个问题，使我不能专心学习。There exists a problem between my parents and me, and that has made it impossible for me to concentrate on my study我对太空探险很痴迷，因此我业余时间常去图书馆，在那里我掌握了许多与太空探险有关的材料。I am so crazy about space exploration that in my spare time I often go to the library, where I have got the hang of much about space exploration这使我的父母很生气，因为他们认为我的爱好对我的学习有害。This makes my parents very angry because they think my hobby is harmful to my study使我沮丧的是他们总是阻止我去图书馆，并督促我花更多的时间在我的学习上。(主语从句)What upsets me is that they always prevent me from going to the library and urge me to spend much more time on my study.依我看，良好的爱好不仅对我的全面发展有益，而且有助于我日后的成功。In my view, not only are healthy hobbies beneficial to my overall development but they can also contribute to my success in time既然你处理过类似的情况，我想知道你是否能给我一些建议。Now that you have dealt with such situation, I'm wondering whether you can offer me some suggestions.2升级平淡句用现在分词作状语升级句There exists a problem between my parents and me, making it impossible for me to concentrate on my study.用非限制性定语从句升级句There exists a problem between my parents and me, which has made it impossible for me to concentrate on my study.3衔接成美文Dear Stephen，There exists a problem between my parents and me, which has made it impossible for me to concentrate on my study.Actually, I am so crazy about space exploration that in my spare time I often go to the library, where I have got the hang of much about space exploration.However, this makes my parents very angry because they think my hobby is harmful to my study.Moreover, what upsets me is that they always prevent me from going to the library and urge me to spend much more time on my study.In my view, not only are healthy hobbies beneficial to my overall development but they can also contribute to my success in time.Now that you have dealt with such situation, I'm wondering whether you can offer me some suggestions.Yours，Yours，Li Hua