09春蒋氏四级图表作文秘笈2.ppt

蒋氏四级写作秘笈蒋氏四级写作秘笈n1.充分引用引用标题n2.充分引用引用提示n3.按照按照提示分段2009.41Chapter VI-图表型Chapter VI:Type 图表写作1.讲解2.模板与范文2009.42Chapter VI-图表型Looking at a graph,ask yourself 3 questions:1.What does the graph show?(Title)2.What is happening?(Figures)rise?Fall?Increase?decrease?Or:What are the biggest and smallest numbers?3.What is the focus?(Describe the change or Analyze the causes?)(Outline)Introduction2009.43Chapter VI-图表型Fire Causes in London Smokers50%37.5%12.5%Children playing with matchesDefective insulationIntroductionWhat does it show?biggest numberbiggest number2009.44Chapter VI-图表型 Outline 1.描述图表 2.分析图表 3.得出结论 Outline 1.描述图表 2.分析原因 3.得出结论IntroductionFire Causes in LondonWhat is the focus?2009.45Chapter VI-图表型Introduction1.What does the graph show?2.What is happening?3.What is the focus?2009.46Chapter VI-图表型IntroductionFunctions of Car1.1.上图表明某地居民对轿车的主要作用的看法上图表明某地居民对轿车的主要作用的看法2.2.请描述该图请描述该图3.3.你的看法是什么？你的看法是什么？2009.47Chapter VI-图表型When you write,ask yourself 3 questions1.Analyze or explain everything in the graph?2.Use the biggest and even the smallest?3.At a loss for words and expressions to write?No.Instead,pick the main ideas.Yes,if you have to compare.Look at the graph,outline and directions for useful expressions/words to quote.2009.48Chapter VI-图表型Example 1:People Living below Poverty Line250200150100500in million197819851997People Living below Poverty Line25015050YearNumber of People2009.49Chapter VI-图表型 People Living below Poverty Line(1)下图所示为中国贫困线以下人口的 变化，请描述其变化(2)请说明发生变化的原因(3)解决目前中国贫困人口问题还有什么困难Example 1:People Living below Poverty Line2009.410Chapter VI-图表型Template 1 要背下来！要背下来！The chart describes（引用标题）.As is shown in the chart,（概括描述图表）.（展开一句）.Several factors contribute to the change.First,(原因1).Second,(原因2).Last,(原因3).From the analysis above,we may safely conclude that(你的结论).(结尾句).2009.411Chapter VI-图表型Sample writing The public is always concerned over the issue of people living below poverty line（引用标题）.This graph is about changes in the number of people living below poverty line.As shown in the graph,the population living below poverty line decreased between 1978 and 1997（概括描述）.In 1997,the number dropped to 50 million,a decrease by 80 per cent（展开一句）.People Below Poverty Line2009.412Chapter VI-图表型Sample writing Several factors contributed to the decrease.First,Chinas prospered economy has expanded peoples wallets.Second,peoples living condition has improved remarkably.All this results in a drop in the number of people living below poverty line.2009.413Chapter VI-图表型Sample writing However,there are still many poverty-stricken people due to Chinas overpopulation,limited resources and relatively low employment（存在的问题）,to name just a few.Of course,the government is making every effort to solve these problems.2009.414Chapter VI-图表型Mode of traveling19902003By air8%25%By train58%35%By car10%32%By bike24%8%Total100%100%Example 2:Changes in the Way of Travel2009.415Chapter VI-图表型 Changes in the Way of Travel(1)上图所示为某城市1990年至2003年间人们旅行所用交通工具的变化，请描述其变化(2)简述你从中得出的结论Example 2:Changes in the Way of Travel2009.416Chapter VI-图表型Template 2 要背下来！要背下来！Lead-in sentence.The graph describes(引用标题).We can see from the graph that(对图表进行细节描述).From the above discussion,we may conclude that(展望或结论).(结尾句).2009.417Chapter VI-图表型Sample writing Economic and social developments usually bring changes to peoples life（Lead-in）.The table chart above shows the changes in the way people travel（引用标题）.Changes in the Way of Travel2009.418Chapter VI-图表型Sample writing As can be seen from the table,there are two remarkable changes.One is the rate of traveling by air,and the other is that by car.The former rose from 8%in 1990 to 25%in 2003,while the latter climbed from 10%to 32%,both increasing by over 3 times.The table also indicates that the number of people traveling by train decreased by 23%though it is still their first choice.描述其变化描述其变化2009.419Chapter VI-图表型Sample writing Tentatively,two factors caused the changes.First,people are better off.More people can afford to travel by air or by car of their own.Second,traveling by train is still favored by the majority as it is cheaper than other ways of traveling.Therefore,we may conclude that as peoples living standard keeps rising,trains,cars and planes will be three main forms of transport for long-distance travel.2009.420Chapter VI-图表型Ways of Expressions1)My age is 2 times that of your age.(is 2 times as old as.2)The gross domestic product last year was estimated to be 1.5 times that of 2000.（国民生产总值（国民生产总值GDP）3)By that time they will have produced three times as much grain as they did in 2001.S+V+X times+that ofas+adj.(sth.)+asA 是是B的多的多少少倍？2009.421Chapter VI-图表型Ways of Expressions S+V+(by)+x/x%/x times(1)In 1980 crude oil production rose by 1 million barrels compared with 1975.(2)The farming products decreased by 2 times over that 10 years ago.(3)The average income of Chinese farmers increased by 9%in the last decade.增加增加了了多多少少/倍倍/百百分之几分之几2009.422Chapter VI-图表型Ways of Expressions S+V+to X(1)The number of people in the city traveling abroad increased to 13,000 in 2005.(2)By 1997,the number of people living below the poverty line had decreased to 50 million.(3)Over that in 1990,the rate of people traveling by bike in 2003 dropped to 8%.增加增加/减少减少到到多少多少2009.423Chapter VI-图表型14001200100080060040020001975 1980 1985 1990 1995 2000YearAverage Income(Yuan)Average Income of Chinese Farmers1802003504206801250 Outline 1.描述变化描述变化 2.分析原因分析原因 3.得出结论得出结论2009.424Chapter VI-图表型Average Income of Chinese Farmers The above line graph describes changes in the average income of Chinese farmers between 1975 and 2000（引用标题）.As illustrated by the graph,Chinese farmers income has been increasing since 1975（概括描述变化）.For example,between 1995 and 2000,their income increased remarkably by 84%（展开一句）.2009.425Chapter VI-图表型 What caused the change?There are probably two major factors contributing to it.First,with the household contract responsibility system,which offers many policies favorable to farmers,they are greatly motivated.Second,the government has increased its subsidies to farmers and reduced taxes on farmers.Average Income of Chinese Farmers分析原因分析原因2009.426Chapter VI-图表型 （结论）From the above analysis,we can conclude that the more productive the farmers are,the higher income they get.We can also infer that Chinese farmers income will keep increasing with those policies favorable to them.Average Income of Chinese Farmers2009.427Chapter VI-图表型