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Welcome话题写作话题写作Advertisements Topic Advantageshelp us in many aspects.benefit a lot./be beneficial to keep sb.informed of;have access to;be accessible to expose sb.to sth.,help compare have a better understanding of promote the sales of,sell well educate sb.to do/teach sb.to do However,there exist a lot of disadvantages.mislead sb./cheat sb.into/take in.interrupt sb./bother sb.do harm to./be harmful to,increase the cost of/waste doing DisadvantagesYour attitude/opinion:1.As far as I am concerned,outweigh2.Even thoughI still consider it3.With all itswe must acknowledge4.I believe we canas long asPart1:Part2:Part3:Learn to organizeintroduction to your topicadvantages/disadvantagesyour opinionA good compositionOrganizationContentLanguageReading As science and technology develops,we can see advertisements almost everywhere.Advertisements help people get much information about new products.Company can sell more products than before.And some advertisements educate the public.Advertisements have some bad effects on our daily life.It wastes a lot of natural resources,which increases the cost of products.They mislead or even cheat consumers.They make us upset.I think advertising is useful.If we have enough facts from ads,we can easily make a much better choice.(Introduction)(Advantages)(Disadvantages)(My opinion)(86words)Learn to polish As science and technology develops,we can see advertisements almost everywhere 增分策略一增分策略一 使用高级词汇使用高级词汇people are constantly exposed to adsPeople have access to/are accessible to adsAdvertising finds its way into/floods into our daily life.With science and technology developing With the development of science and technology,替换为：替换为：替换为：替换为：1.It wastes a lot of natural resources,which increases the cost of products.1)increasing the cost of products.增分策略增分策略 二二 使用非谓语形式使用非谓语形式2)causing/leading to/resulting in/contributing to/bringing about2.If we have enough facts from ads,we can easily make a much better choice.the higher prices of products.enough facts from ads,we can.Havingenough facts from Armed with/Equipped with1.Para.2 is about advantages of advertisements.Para3:Advertisements have some bad effects on our daily life.However,advertisements have some bad effects on our daily life.增分策略三增分策略三 巧用过渡连接表达巧用过渡连接表达2.It wastes a lot of natural resources,which increases the cost of products.They mislead or even cheat consumers.They also make us upset.In the first place,it wastes.In the second place,they mislead.Furthermore,they make us upset.(段内句子之间衔接段内句子之间衔接)(段际过渡段际过渡)增分策略四增分策略四 加强一义多形加强一义多形How to express ones opinion or suggestion 1.As far as I am concerned/As to me/From my point of view we should attach more importance to 2.As for my own idea aboutI believe/think/propose/suggest 3.Personally/But for me,I would rather/prefer to.4.Even thoughI still consider it5.With all itswe must acknowledgeAdvertisements help people get much information about new products.1)It is ads that help people get./It is with the help of ads that people can.增分策略五增分策略五 句式变换句式变换2)It is believed that ads help inform people of new products.3)If it were not for ads,people wouldnt get 4)How helpful ads are in providing information for people.With the help of ads,people can get much information about new products.Making use of ads,companies can promote the sales of products.Some advertisements educate the public1.Advertisements benefit us in many ways.增分策略六增分策略六 注重主题句注重主题句2.Ads bring a lot of benefits to us.3.Advertisements are beneficial to us in many aspects.4.Ads are playing an important part/role in our daily life.With the development of science and technology,people are constantly exposed to ads.Ads benefit us in many ways.It is believed that ads can inform people of new products.Making use of ads,companies can promote the sales of products.Advertisements educate the public.However,there exist some bad effects on our daily life.In the first place,it is a waste of natural resources,increasing the cost of products.In the second place,not only do ads mislead or even cheat consumers but also make us upset and disturbed.As far as I am concerned,advertising is of use.If we are armed with enough facts from ads,it is easy for us to make a much better choice of goods.Appreciating the polished work(123 words)Summary To be complete.To be accurate.To be varied.To be coherent.三性一复杂三性一复杂内容的内容的完整性完整性 用词的用词的准确性准确性篇章的篇章的连贯性连贯性 句子的句子的复杂复杂度度