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更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君专题专题 06 场景描写场景描写（高分定律）（高分定律）【考情分析】【考情分析】年份年份卷别卷别主题主题话题话题2023新高考新高考 I 卷卷人与自我之个人成长人与自我之个人成长我被鼓励参加写作比赛我被鼓励参加写作比赛2023浙江浙江 1 月卷月卷人与自然之人与动物人与自然之人与动物我与蜂鸟的神奇邂逅我与蜂鸟的神奇邂逅2022新高考新高考 I&II 卷卷人与自我之个人成长人与自我之个人成长鼓励残疾男孩参加越野跑鼓励残疾男孩参加越野跑2022浙江浙江 6 月卷月卷人与社会之善行义举人与社会之善行义举为无家可归者发放食物为无家可归者发放食物2022浙江浙江 1 月卷月卷人与自我之个人成长人与自我之个人成长与“最不合拍”搭档成为好友与“最不合拍”搭档成为好友2021新高考新高考 I&II 卷卷人与社会之亲情关爱人与社会之亲情关爱母亲节的惊喜母亲节的惊喜2021浙江浙江 6 月卷月卷人与社会之善行义举人与社会之善行义举帮助别人度过难关帮助别人度过难关2021浙江浙江 1 月卷月卷人与社会之故事人与社会之故事+遇险遇险男孩意外卡住头而走红网络男孩意外卡住头而走红网络【写作指导】【写作指导】人与自然的和谐相处、自然灾害、环境保护、动植物的保护、人与动物等热门话题中都会涉及到场景的描写，借景抒情，通过对景物的描写，寄寓、烘托着人物的抱负和情感是谋篇布局的一种写作手法。适当的环境描写可以烘托氛围，衬托主题，折射人物内心世界。（2022 年新高考 I 卷）Students from seven different primary schools in and around the small town were warming up and walking the route（路线）through thick evergreen forest.（走过终年常绿的茂盛的森林）【素材宝库】【素材宝库】词汇积累之动词词汇积累之动词风风howl 嚎叫,blow 吹,whip 鞭打,sting 刺痛,kiss 亲吻,stroked（轻抚）雨雨beat against.拍打,crash against 击,pour down 倾盆,fall 落下,阳光阳光come out 出来,rise 升起,set 落下,kiss 亲吻,flood in 照射进来,be bathed in 沐浴在专题06 读后续写场景描写（高分定律）-【高频 热点】2024年高考英语话题写作通关必备攻略更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君雪雪dance 跳舞,float/fall/drift 飘,melt away 融化,blanket 裹住,cover 覆盖星星星星shine 闪耀,sparkle/twinkle 闪耀,wink/blink 眨眼睛,hide 躲藏,decorate 装饰,dot 装饰词汇积累之形容词（场景环境）词汇积累之形容词（场景环境）pure 纯洁的dark 黑暗的 dazzling 耀眼的 pale/faint 暗淡 dim 昏暗的 feathery 鹅毛般的 sparkling/twinkling/glittering 闪闪发光的 lofty 高耸入云 foggy 雾蒙蒙的misty 有雾 undulating 起伏的 amber-like 琥珀一样的 winding 蜿蜒的steep 险峻的 sunny/rainy/cloudy/snowy starless 没有星星 silky 丝滑的 hard 硬的 soft/gentle 轻的 strong/violent 猛烈的 sharp 尖锐的rough 粗糙的icy/freezing 冰冷的 shaggy 毛茸茸的warm 温暖的 biting 刺骨的bumpy 崎岖不平的 burning/scorching 火辣辣sweet 甜的 wet/dam 潮湿的choking 让人窒息的bone-chilling 刺骨的 strong 强烈的 fresh 新鲜的 smelly/foul/stinky 臭的;难闻的fragrant 清香的 deep 深的 noisy 吵闹的 gurgling 潺潺的（流水）deafening 震耳欲聋的low 小声的 high 大声的 howling 怒号的；猛烈的melodious 悦耳的 短语积累短语积累风风暴风雨之夜 a stormy night；四面受风 exposed to the four winds of heaven；雨雨连绵不断的雨 continuous/constant rains；在茫茫大雨中 in the blinding rain；狂风暴雨 fierce/heavy/violent storms；阳光阳光在春天温暖的阳光里 in the warm spring sunshine 沐日光浴 bathe/bask in(the)sunshine；在盛夏灼热的阳光下 under the blazing/scorching/burning sun of midsummer；the setting/rising sun 落日/冉冉升起的太阳;雪雪深埋在雪中 be buried in snow；Get piled with snow 白雪皑皑，积雪堆积如山；星空星空stars sparkled in the sky 星星在天空中闪烁；the dark,raining evening 雨夜交加的夜晚 花草花草fragile flowers 娇嫩的花；green grass 青草；fragrant roses 芬芳的玫瑰鸟语鸟语the twitter of birds 吱吱喳喳的叫声；birds soaring through the air 空中翱翔的鸟儿更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君句式积累句式积累1.The pure feathery snowflakes danced in the air,making a beautiful picture.鹅毛般纯洁的的雪花在空中飞舞，像一幅美丽的图画。2.Sparkling stars winked at me in a darkening sky.夜空中的闪烁星星向我眨眼睛。3.The scenery along the journey is just like a breath-taking landscape painting.沿路的风景就像一幅美丽的山水画。4.A heavy silence blanketed the room.整个房子沉浸在一片寂寞中。5.The beautiful park was a scented carpet of colours.美丽的公园就是一个芬芳的彩色地毯。6.Immediately,an absolute darkness ruled the forest.顷刻间，黑暗统治了森林。7.Darkness blanketed the whole room.黑暗笼罩了整个房间。8.The fragrant flowers attracted lots of butterflies,lingering(萦绕萦绕)around them.鲜花的香味引来了很多蝴蝶，它们围着花朵。9.The flowers were gently swaying in the breeze.花儿在微风中轻轻舞动。10.Blue skies stood tall and far.蓝蓝的天空高高耸立。11.The stars shine like diamonds.星星如钻石般闪耀。12.The beach is bathed in the amber-like sunshine.海滩沐浴在琥珀色的阳光中。13.The sky was dotted with sparkling stars.天上繁星点点。14.Stars winked at me in a darkening sky.夜空中星星向我眨眼睛。更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君15.It felt like the amber-like sunshine was kissing every inch of his skin.他感觉琥珀般的阳光亲吻着他的每一寸肌肤。16.Clusters of stars decorate the vast sky like sparkling of jewels.繁星像闪闪发光的珠宝一样装饰了浩瀚的天空。17.I was disturbed by the annoying sound of the rain.淅淅沥沥的雨声扰乱了我的思绪。18.The sky is overcast,darkened with gloomy clouds.天空阴沉，乌云密布。19.The sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of jewels.天空是浓浓的灰色，伴着拥挤的朵朵云。20.The thunder was rumbling in the distance.远处雷声隆隆。21.The rain was pouring down.雨在倾盆而下。22.Rain splashed against the windows.雨点啪啦啪啦打在窗户上。23.The pure feathery snowflakes danced in the air,making a beautiful picture.鹅毛般纯洁的雪花在空中飞舞，像一幅美丽的图画。24.The frozen snow crunched under our feet.冻结的雪在我们的脚下嘎吱作响。25.A gentle warm breeze stroked his head，comforting all his tiredness.一阵和煦的微风拂过他的头，抚慰了他所有的疲惫。26.The breeze gently kissed her cheeks.微风轻柔地亲吻着她的脸庞。27.The icy wind started howling,stinging my face.寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。28.Wind and rain now whipped the house.风和雨像鞭子一样击打着屋子。29.Snow blanketed every rooftop and weighed on the branches of old trees.更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君雪覆盖了每一个屋顶,压在老树的枝丫上。30.The sun was at its highest.The heat beat down on my head as if I was bacon under the grill.太阳处于最高点,热浪击打在头上，我好像烤架下的培根一样。31.The water kept rising.Two hours passed.He did not dare to move an inch for fear of slipping.不断上升。两个小时过去了。他不敢动一英寸，怕滑倒。32.The animals grew restless as if in anticipation of a disaster.动物们变得焦躁不安，好像在等待一场灾难。33.The roaring fire swallowed the whole house.怒火吞噬了整个房子。谚语积累谚语积累1.There are four seasons in a day,ten miles in different days.一天有四季,十里不同天。2.If you dont go to Songgu Temple,you will feel uneasy at home.不到松谷庵,回家心不安。3.You cant go to Tiandu Peak and visit the mountains.不上天都峰、游山一场空。4.Spring is bright on the Yunwai Peak and ten thousand trees are red after the azalea blossoms.云外峰上春光明,杜鹃开后万树红。5.The moon shines between pines,and the clear spring stones flow upward.明月松间照,清泉石上流。6.Black clouds rise in the northwest and thunderstorms are bound to come.西北起黑云,雷雨必来临。7.Old ancestors of Dongbifeng and Rain.东比风、下雨的老祖宗。8.Heavy fog is only three,after three cloudy and rainy days.大雾不过三,过三阴雨天。9.Red sky at night,sailors delight.Red sky in the morning,sailor take warning.早霞不出门，晚霞行千里。10.Halo around the sun or moon,rain or snow soon.日晕三更雨，月晕午时风。11.When the stars begin to huddle,the earth will soon become a puddle.月明星稀。12.When ladybugs swarm,expect a day thats warm.蚂蚁搬家，天将雨。13.If bees stay at home,rain will soon come.if they fly away,fine will be the day 蜜蜂迟归，雨来风吹。14.Mother nature is good,also cold butcher.大自然是善良的慈母,同时也是冷酷的屠夫。15.Rain comes after sunshine,and after a dark cloud,a clear sky.晴日之后有雨水，乌云过后见青天。万能写作模板万能写作模板阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君Early one weekend morning,I was sleeping like a log when the telephone rang.When I answered I heard my Grandmas voice“Hey,sweetheart.I have missed you so much lately.Why dont you come to the countryside and enjoy some fine views?”she asked.“Dad,Grandma is inviting us to her home,”I shouted to my father who was busy in the kitchen.“Fine with me,”he responded in a casual tone.After a quick breakfast,we drove to Grandmas.Once we arrived,we were both thrilled by the breathtaking landscape.The plum trees in the backyard were ripe with fruit,while millions of wildflowers colored the valley.Grandma prepared delicious lunch including her special homemade apple jam,which was my favorite.Seeing my greedy eyes,grandma said“Take some when you leave,and Ive got plenty stored in the cellar(地窖).”Talking and laughing,we didnt even notice that it was late in the afternoon,though somewhat cooler than it had been that morning.Grandma suggested that we take her homemade wooden boat for a tour along the nearby river.Seated in the boat,looking up at the sky,I felt like the clouds were greeting us cheerfully from above.In the vast fields,the golden trees were like brides in the sun.The breeze skimmed over the surface of the field,carrying the sweet smell of the flowers.It was like a picture painted by one of the Dutch masters.“It is so nice to spend some quality time with family,”Dad murmured.“It feels like were on an adventure,”I added.“Its been so much fun!”While we were admiring the splendid setting around us,the weather started getting hot and humid again.At first,we ignored this change,but when dad looked up at the sky,he saw dark,low clouds were approaching us.Then a fierce gale(大风)sprang up.Lightning flashed within the black clouds,followed by a roar of thunder.“Row!”Dad shouted,trembling,“A tornado(龙卷风)is coming!”There was no time to think.We rowed as fast as we could._Grandma opened the door for us._更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君【高考真题】高考真题】（2023 年浙江卷年浙江卷 1 月）月）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。I was invited to a cookout on an old friends farm in western Washington.I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years.A noise at a window caught my attention,so I entered it.It was a hummingbird(蜂鸟),desperately trying to escape.She was covered in spider-webs(蛛网)and was barely able to move her wings.She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.With the bird in my cupped hand,I looked around to see how she had gotten in.The broken window glass was the likely answer.I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside,closing the door securely behind me.When I opened my hand,the bird did not fly away;she sat looking at me with her bright eyes.I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings.Still,she made no attempt to fly.Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired?Or too thirsty?As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle,she began to move.I stopped,and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away.Hovering(悬停),she approached within six inches of my face.For a very long moment,this tiny creature looked into my eyes,turning her head from side to side.Then she flew quickly out of sight.During the cookout,I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident.They promised to fix the window.As I was departing,my friends walked me to my car.I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering.She turned from person to person until she came to me.She again looked directly into my eyes,then let out a squeaking call and was gone.For a moment,all were speechless.Then someone said,“She must have come to say goodbye.”注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。A few weeks later,I went to the farm again._更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君_I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared._【名校模拟题提升练】名校模拟题提升练】1.（2023 江苏盐城江苏盐城高三阶段练习）高三阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。One day,some young people from a local rehabilitation(康复)center visited a wildlife park.Tippi,a guide,stood before a cheetah(猎豹).“Her name is Subira.Shes a three-year-old cheetah,”she tole the audience.All the visitors sitting in the chairs were amazed by the cheetahs beauty,except a teenage boy,Cory.He pulled a long face and made noises,showing his boredom.Tippi continued,“The cheetah is the fastest animal on earth.”“Arent you,honey?”She asked in a cheerful tone,looking at the cheetah lying atop a tree.Giving Subira a dirty look,Cory replied,“Oh,just a skinny cat.Next!Bring out the stupid tigers or whatever so we can get this over with!”However,the cheetah gently looked at Cory and make a happy sound.“I think she likes you,”Tippi told Cory.“I dont care,”the boy just replied.What had happened to Cory?Why was he so angry?The boy had dreamed of someday playing Major League Baseball and having many fans.He knew he had a promising future.That was before the car accident.In it,he lost his leg and also lost his hope,joy and spirit.He felt useless and hopeless.Now he sat in a wheelchair,angry at the world.He was here today on another“boring field trip”from the rehabilitation program.Suddenly,the creature jumped down.Seeming to show her skills,she immediately ran fast forward.“Oh,shes so beautiful,”the crowd said.注意:1.续写词数应为 150 左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君“She only has three legs!”someone suddenly said,surprised._At last,Cory smiled,with his eyes shining with hope and confidence in his professional future._2（2023广东广东高三校联考阶段练习）高三校联考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Caught in a floodMary and her parents were downstairs in the living room.Mary was looking through the windows at the endless rain outside.It had been raining non-stop for three days.She had never seen a storm this bad.It was making her nervous.The wind roared and the rain beat on the roof and windows.Dad was listening to a weather report on the radio,while Mum was putting their important documents and disaster supplies into a bag.“Mum,Dad,”said Mary suddenly,“I think we should leave here right away!”“No,”said Dad.“Its too late:The radio says the city has already been flooded.”“We can drive our car through the floodwater.Lets us leave!Im really scared!”cried Mary.“We cant do that,honey,”explained Mum,“otherwise the moving water could wash the car away!”Mary walked to the door.She was curious to see how much water there was outside.“Dont open the door!”shouted Mum and Dad at the same time.“The water may flood in!”Dad moved the dinner table against the door,in case the floodwater forced the door open.Mum waved to Mary to sit on the sofa.“Mary,dont worry.Everythings going to be OK,”she said softly,trying her best to 更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君comfort Mary.Her voice was calm,but Mary could tell she was worried too.Without saying a single word,Dad walked to the sofa,sat down and hugged his wife and daughter.The sudden silence in the house seemed to make the wind and rain more frightening outside.What could they do?注意：1续写词数应为 150 左右；2续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1:All of a sudden,the floodwater forced the door open._Paragraph 2:Being upstairs,they breathed a sigh of relief._3（2023吉林长春吉林长春东北师大附中校考模拟预测）东北师大附中校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。As Hurricane Lan bore down on Florida,many residents who stayed put found themselves unable to leave even if they tried.For hours they were forced to fight heavy winds and attempt to escape flooding inside long-loved homes that had become frightening,deadly traps.Within days,around 100 deaths in the state would be attributed to the hurricane,many of them were older residents who drowned.When the water slipped in under the door of their home,it was just a glimmer on the floor,a sign that it was 更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君time to go.It was Wednesday,Sept.28,around noon,and Bishop woke up her two brothers,who had been resting after lunch.She pulled the wheelchair up to the oldest,Russell,67.Her other brother,Todd,63,could manage with a walker.Both men had been born with cerebral palsy(脑瘫),and their mental development was like that of a young child.About 10 years ago,they started showing signs of Parkinsons disease.But they found joy in their surroundings.Todd liked collecting cans at the beach.Russell loved riding the bus and going to parks.Bishop,61,was their lifeline,their little sister who had long felt an obligation to keep them safe.“Weve got to get going!”she shouted to them.She went to open the front door.It would not move.The weight of the water on the other side had made it shut.She rushed to try the door to the garage.It,too,was stuck.Thats when the house began to flood.It went from ankle-deep to knee-deep in less than five minutes.Bishop knew that there was no way out.Now Bishop and her brothers were trapped.At 12:34 p.m.,she called 911 but couldnt get through.There was no one she could get in touch with.To try her fortune,she texted a neighbor,Walters