Unit4 作文训练-- 高一英语人教版(2019)必修第一册.docx
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1、2019年人教版高一英语必修一 unit4 作文训练应用文写作假设你是来自美国的汤姆,你从电视新闻上得知你朋友王林所在的城市发生了地震。请你给王林写一封信,内容包括:1.询问王林及其家人是否安好;2.得知该地震的影响:6人死亡,500多人受伤,20人失踪,200多所房子坍塌;3.愿意尽最大努力提供帮助。注意:1.词数80左右(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Wang Lin,Yours sincerely,Tom概要写作写作方法1.定位查找核心信息通过阅读定位语篇的核心信息,包括核心单词,核心短语和核心句子。(句子为主,以单词和短语为辅)2.
2、改写用自己的语言改写信息在核心信息的基础上进行语言表达形式的改写,对原文的语言表达形式尽可能实现大规模的改变。改写过程中,原则上字数不超过原句,不改变原文的逻辑结构,充分考虑语句压缩。3.核查添加关联词,检查句子的连贯性核查句子的连贯性。核查标点、语法、连接词及字数,优先考虑使用较短的连接词,如:but,then,later等。【实战演练】典例示范阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Weve reached a strangesome would say unusualpoint.While fighting world hunger continues to be the m
3、atter of vital importance according to a recent report from the World Health Organization(WHO),more people now die from being overweight than from being underweight.Its the good life thats more likely to kill us these days.Worse,nearly 18 million children under the age of five around the world are e
4、stimated to be overweight.Whats going on?We really dont have many excuses for our weight problems.The dangers of the problem have been drilled into us by public-health campaigns since 2001 and the message is getting throughup to a point.In the 1970s,Finland,for example,had the highest rate of heart
5、disease in the world and being overweight was its main cause.Not any more.A public-health campaign has greatly reduced the number of heart disease deaths by 80 percent over the past three decades.Maybe that explains why the percentage of people in Finland taking diet pills doubled between 2001 and 2
6、005,and doctors even offer surgery of removing fat inside and change the shape of the body.No wonder it ranks as the worlds most body-conscious country.We know what we should be doing to lose weightbut actually doing it is another matter.By far the most popular excuse is not taking enough exercise.M
7、ore than half of us admit we lack willpower.Others blame good food.They say:its just too inviting and it makes them overeat.Some also blame their parentstheir genes.But unfortunately,the parents are wronged because theyre normal in shape,or rather slim.Its a similar story around the world,although p
8、eople are relatively unlikely to have tried to lose weight.Parents are eager to see their kids shape up.Do as I saynot as I do.解题思路第一步:定位Part 1:1.More people now _than from being underweight.2.Its the _ thats more likely to_these days.Part 2:3.The _ of the problem have been drilled into us by _.4.In
9、 Finland,a public-health campaign has greatly _the number of _deaths by 80 percent over the past three decades.Part 3:5.Maybe that explains why the percentage of people in Finland _doubled between 2001 and 2005.6.We know _but actually doing it is another matter.Part 4:7.Others _good food.8.Its a sim
10、ilar story around the world,although people are relatively _ _第二步:改写1.要点1和2合并:Good life is more likely to kill us and more people now die from being overweight.改写: Good life becomes _ and more people now die from being overweight.2.要点3和4合并:People have gradually realized the dangers of being overweig
11、ht through public-health campaigns since 2001 and the number of heart disease deaths has been greatly reduced in Finland.改写:Since 2001 people have gradually_the dangers of being overweight through public-health campaigns and people _ heart disease has dropped in Finland.3.要点5和6合并:_改写:Many people _4.
12、要点7和8合并:_改写:_第三步:核查_【练一练】第二节概要写作(满分25分)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。How many of us could go a week without our cell phone?Do you even bother to memorize phone numbers any more?Technology has made life so convenient for us.However,we have to face facts:Technology has made us lazy and dependent.Whats the
13、 point of getting up,taking a shower,getting dressed,and driving to the movies when you can just sit on the couch and fire up Netflix? Weve all been there before.Youre on the fence about whether or not you want to get out and do something,but then something comes over you.You start looking around at
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