【省级公开课课件】高考英语读后续写课件24.pptx
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1、How to Plot A Story-以高三期中考Rachel一文为例A GoodContinuationWriting0 1 情节02 语言“写”丰富得体 “续”合情合理 如何架构情节?(Plot a story)0 1 主题 02 框架 03 细节 01主主题T o guide your wr iting With a smile,Mrs.Willow comforted her saying it had been broken before.However,Rachel knew that it was just a lie.A deep sense of regret arose
2、in her heart and soon overwhelmed her.She felt her tears rolling down her face without control.Mrs.Willow put aside the cold medicine,looking gently into her eyes and wiped out her tears.“It was an accident.Being attarcted by beauty is the nature of humans”(14分分)With a smile,Mrs.Willow comforted her
3、 saying it had been broken before.“Really?”she sighed with relief.Mrs Willow handed the medicine over to her and stroke her head tenderly,“of course,dear,you did nothing wrong.Whats more,you are a kind girl who is able to buy medicine for mom.”Rachel was surprised to hear this.The words sowed seeds
4、of love in her mind.On the way home,she felt the setting sun was warm and the wind was gentle.(14分分)主主题不不对主主题模糊模糊Theme确定一个主题,尾段呼应原文Para 1:There were beautiful things everywhere pretty china figures and delicate vases.Para 2:With a smile,Mrs.Willow comforted her saying it had been broken before.原原文文梗
5、梗概概:Rachel 是是个个笨笨手手笨笨脚脚(clumsy)的的女女孩孩儿儿,总总是是打打翻翻东东西西,给给别别人人造造成成麻麻烦烦。就就连连生生病病的的妈妈妈妈,Rachel提提出出泡泡茶茶,妈妈妈妈都都宁宁愿愿等等爸爸爸爸。妈妈妈妈让让她她去去Mrs Willow那那拿拿感感冒冒药药,叮叮嘱嘱她她老老太太太太房房子子里里到到处处是是漂漂亮亮的的东东西西,如如果果邀邀请请她她进进去去,最最好好拒拒绝绝;但但盛盛情情难难却却下下,Rachel进了客厅进了客厅.Theme(End):?Was Rachel still clumsy?In writing the article,the writ
6、er intends _.to describe another disaster to present how honest Rachel was to illustrate the growth of Rachel to show Mrs Willows kindnessRachel may get over her _ and be more _.carelessness clumsiness .careful self-confident.ThemeEnding遇险挫折爱心传递 个人成长Forest Adventures(吵架夫妻)(骑马追兔)(路遇黑熊)They finally go
7、t home and led a happy life.Believe in Miracles.(出租车手机丢失)Becki backed home with the help of a stranger.(夜路遇贵人)Love will melt your heart.(小女孩和Mr.Dan)People spread kindness,driving away anxiety/fear/lonliness.Marys Big Day(陌生环境,重获归属感)A Goodby Kiss(父亲的过世,认识到感恩)They changed themselves after going throug
8、h sth.02框架框架To support your writing搭四个框架一段开一段开头 二段二段结尾尾(主主题)一一段段结尾尾(衔接接)二段开二段开头,细读文本线索搭四处框架一段开一段开头 二段二段结尾尾(主主题)一段一段结尾尾(衔接接)二段开二段开头,细读文本线索 It was an Art lesson.Rachel sat at the desk watching her classmates busy preparing the water jars and paints.She understood why Mrs.Weston asked her to sit down a
9、nd got Lisa to fetch everything for her.It was always a disaster when Rachel tried to do Art!Rachel sighed and reached out to dip her brush in some black paint andoh,no!She knocked over the jar.The water spread across the desk and drowned the paper.Lisa called Mrs.Weston to see what Rachel had done.
10、Rachel went red in the face.She jumped to her feet to get a cloth.Her chair fell over backwards.She turned round and her paintbrush caught Lisa across the face,giving her a black moustache.Lisa was so surprised that she fell back against a wire book-stand.It came crashing down and the books went all
11、 over the floor.How clumsy!Rachel thought as she went home on the bus.The bus stopped outside her house.She jumped up and her elbow(肘部)knocked a womans hat right over her eyes.Oh,no!Rachel said sorry,got off and ran indoors.Mum wasnt in the kitchen but lay in bed as she caught an awful cold.Rachel o
12、ffered to make a cup of tea but Mum would rather wait for Dad.Rachel sighed.She understood Mum was afraid she would spill(溅出)it.It was an Art lesson.Rachel sat at the desk watching her classmates busy preparing the water jars and paints.She understood why Mrs.Weston asked her to sit down and got Lis
13、a to fetch everything for her.It was always a disaster when Rachel tried to do Art!Rachel sighed and reached out to dip her brush in some black paint andoh,no!She knocked over the jar.The water spread across the desk and drowned the paper.Lisa called Mrs.Weston to see what Rachel had done.Rachel wen
14、t red in the face.She jumped to her feet to get a cloth.Her chair fell over backwards.She turned round and her paintbrush caught Lisa across the face,giving her a black moustache.Lisa was so surprised that she fell back against a wire book-stand.It came crashing down and the books went all over the
15、floor.How clumsy!Rachel thought as she went home on the bus.The bus stopped outside her house.She jumped up and her elbow(肘部)knocked a womans hat right over her eyes.Oh,no!Rachel said sorry,got off and ran indoors.Mum wasnt in the kitchen but lay in bed as she caught an awful cold.Rachel offered to
16、make a cup of tea but Mum would rather wait for Dad.Rachel sighed.She understood Mum was afraid she would spill(溅出)it.Scene 1 a disasterScene 2 a disasterScene 3 a possible disaster “But would you go to Mrs.Willow for some cold medicine?”asked Mum.Rachel turned to the door at once.“But Rachel,Mrs.Wi
17、llows house is full of beautiful things,so if she asks you to come in,youd better say no.”Rachel sighed and ran out.Mrs.Willow was an old lady with white hair and sharp blue eyes living in an old house.She opened the door and invited her in.Rachel said why she came and that she preferred to wait out
18、side remembering her mothers warning.Mrs.Willow insisted Rachel come inside.Rachel took a deep breath and stepped in.She looked round Mrs.Willows sitting room and saw at once why Mum had been worried.Para 1:There were beautiful things everywhere pretty china figures and delicate vases.Para 2:With a
19、smile,Mrs.Willow comforted her saying it had been broken before.衔接接:Rachel must have broken sth.“But would you go to Mrs.Willow for some cold medicine?”asked Mum.Rachel turned to the door at once.“But Rachel,Mrs.Willows house is full of beautiful things,so if she asks you to come in,youd better say
20、no.”Rachel sighed and ran out.Mrs.Willow was an old lady with white hair and sharp blue eyes living in an old house.She opened the door and invited her in.Rachel said why she came and that she preferred to wait outside remembering her mothers warning.Mrs.Willow insisted Rachel come inside.Rachel too
21、k a deep breath and stepped in.She looked round Mrs.Willows sitting room and saw at once why Mum had been worried.Scene 4?搭四处框架一段开一段开头 二段二段结尾尾(主主题)一段一段结尾尾(衔接接)二段开二段开头,细读文本线索 It was an Art lesson.Rachel sat at the desk watching her classmates busy preparing the water jars and paints.She understood wh
22、y Mrs.Weston asked her to sit down and got Lisa to fetch everything for her.It was always a disaster when Rachel tried to do Art!Rachel sighed and reached out to dip her brush in some black paint andoh,no!She knocked over the jar.The water spread across the desk and drowned the paper.Lisa called Mrs
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